…maybe I was just trying to
figure you out and ravage
your body the way
time has ravaged it…
…or maybe I was just attempting to
make conversation with your lips and
persuade you to reopen
old festering wounds and share your
closed heart with an open heart surgeon
who would rather be operating on your brain,
because that’s where the real skill lies…
…or maybe I was alone
without a candle in the dark and
didn’t have the wherewithal to
whistle while I cursed the wick and
forgot to celebrate the flint
as I watched my lady’s flinty heart
dimming in that fingernail in the sky moon…
…or maybe I was excelling as an underachiever
or achieving delusions of conspicuous splendor…
…or maybe I was neither in love nor in lust;
I was just alone and nonplused and
unwilling to put up much of a fuss
when you opened your lovin’ vein
with that blunt instrument
called your brain and let it spill out
all over my golden-black flame of hair and
drip beneath my astigmatic stare…
…or maybe my mouth ejaculated
when my tongue should have been
on a leash and maybe I unleashed my id
when my superego should have been
refereeing and when my ego was taking
a meeting with my looking-glass self…
…or maybe the blame lyes
with the lie of a shy guy
treading enigmatically in front of
the sphinx and musing in front of
his muses as Medusa washes
the original serpent of sin
from her reptile coif
with an anti venom
made from the blood of Christ and
displays her scarred neck
for Perseus and celebrates her disembodiment
from a netherworld that eschews
phantasmagoria and prevents her
from throwing stones at glass ceilings…

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February 16, 2008 at 1:15 pm
johemmant
This is very, very good Mr Mahalo. The repetition of words slightly morphed works especially well as a driver…..both leading and misleading the reader, and the rhyme scheme is well done too. It’s very dark, the images disturbing, reminds me of a snake sloughing its skin……both what is said and how it is laid out. Anyway, great poem, my favourite bit:
…or maybe I was alone
without a candle in the dark and
didn’t have the wherewithal to
whistle while I cursed the wick and
forgot to celebrate the flint
as I watched my lady’s flinty heart
dimming in that fingernail in the sky moon…
February 16, 2008 at 5:07 pm
Chico Mahalo
appreciate you being so generous and meticulous with your comments… i learn a good bit from them…
be well…
call me chico…please…
February 17, 2008 at 9:28 am
johemmant
Laughing, I like the how Mr Mahalo trips out…….but if you insist
February 17, 2008 at 9:30 am
Chico Mahalo
then by all means, take that trip…
February 18, 2008 at 8:31 pm
Sticky Fingers Gisher
rapping for the tasseled loafer set.
sorry, but i ran over my word count on a previous comment.
February 19, 2008 at 8:04 am
Chico Mahalo
i was thinking the scored-at-least-a-1000-on-their-SAT’s-Doc-Marten-set…